Style as Moral Failure

The Mumpsimus points me to an essay on Angela Carter in which Carter is quoted as saying "I've got nothing against realism. . .[b]ut there is realism and realism. I mean, the questions that I ask myself, I think they are very much to do with reality. I would like, I would really like to have had the guts and the energy and so on to be able to write about, you know, people having battles with the DHSS, but I, I haven't. I've done other things. I mean, I'm an arty person, ok, I write overblown, purple, self-indulgent prose – so fucking what?"

The defensiveness with which Carter speaks here is well-justified. Not only was she accused of being un-British in her choice of subjects and her prose style, but writers like Carter, who willingly employ an "overblown, purple, self-indulgent prose" are frequently treated not like they are in some way bad writers but are actually bad people. I am frequently amazed at the vehemence with which some reviewers and readers react against stories or novels that are unconventional or stylistically "excessive." The authors of such works are regarded as deviant, hostile to "ordinary" readers, just plain contemptuous of good order in matters of storytelling and style. (Even a writer as conventional as John Updike is sometimes attacked for these sins.) And woe indeed to the writer who, like Carter, combines an extra-realistic approach and a "purple" prose.

An essay in the current issue of Raritan (Spring 2004) reprises these once-infamous remarks by Philip Roth:

. . .I set myself the goal of becoming the writer some Jewish critics had been telling me I was all along: irresponsible, conscienceless, unserious. . .A quotation from Melville began to intrigue me, from a letter he had sent to Hawthorne upon completing Moby Dick. . ."I have written a wicked book and feel spotless as a lamb." Now I knew that no matter hard I tried I could never really hope to be wicked; but perhaps if I worked long and hard and diligently, I could be frivolous.

And indeed from Portnoy's Complaint on, Roth produced numerous books that were "frivolous" in comparison to his earlier work, that went beyond the bounds of decorum in structure and good taste in style, that were "excessive" in many, many ways, but . . .so fucking what? They are also books that will continue to stand as among the best American novels written in the latter part of the twentieth century. They are all clearly the consequence of "hard and long and diligent" work, and in their very excesses and frivolity are as serious as anything written by more obviously earnest writers of the time, including Roth's colleague Saul Bellow.

Yet there are still readers who can only see the frivolity–that is the comedy, as savage as it can sometimes become–and the excesses–Roth's frequently freewheeling style–and who regard books like Sabbath's Theater and Operation Shylock as fundamentally not serious, as irresponsible treatments of subjects that ought to be treated in a grim and sober way. They welcomed, on the other hand, American Pastoral, because it seemed closer to this more earnest approach. (I like American Pastoral as well, but not for this reason.) I think Roth would probably agree with Carter in every particular of her statement, and both of these writers could serve as models of the sort of writer willing to endure the charges that their writing is an example of moral failure, as long as they were ultimately seen, rightly, as aesthetic triumphs.

Whenever I hear or read someone urging writers to be "clear," to "communicate," to avoid "trickery," I can only take it as an exhortation to be good. Not to offend official sensibilities or imply that many readers are too timid in their willingness to take risks. In the name of literary decency not to engage in "too much writing." Perhaps in the long run these stylistic gatekeepers can be persuaded that literary form and style have nothing to do with morality, but most of them probably don't really much like literature, anyway, if "literature" is more than just an opportunity to assert your own virtue.

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  1. susan Avatar

    As stubborn as I am about the conventions of writing, finding it lacking in so many of the short stories in current literary periodicals, I do not find Carter’s style anything but exciting and intrigueing. There is skill, artistic freedom, joyous journey and pleasure in “purple prose”, and there is also unskilled gobbledegook being touted these days. The authors you mention are fully worthy of their art.

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  2. R. A. Rubin Avatar

    Purple Prose is indulgence. Don’t try to paint a writers ramblings as art. James Joyce has ruined three generations. Academics, Iowa Workshops are to blame too. Of course Roths early works are his best. Then he ran out of ideas and became his character Zuckerman, sad. Bellow is a great talent churning vomit. Haven’t read Carters stuff, but any bad writer can say “fuck you.” That doesn’t mean that the reader appreciated incredible insight or enjoy. That’s what art should do, insight and enjoy.

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  3. Robert Nagle Avatar

    I agree, but one element that needs to be accounted for. Given competing demands for my time and attention, maximalist prose is unlikely to catch many readers. Right now there is lots of videos, games and sitcoms to keep a literate person happy. If I’m going to read a long indulgent piece of prose, I better be wowwed. Smaller forms and simpler writing styles have a better chance of connecting with an audience (especially in this age of international audiences, where English may not be a person’s first language). One reason for the popularity of a fiction project like thingsmygirlfriendhavearguedabout.com is that it is so easy to approach and requires so little preparation or suspension of disbelief. That’s one reason, by the way, for weblog’s popularity.

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  4. Hapax Legomenon Avatar

    It has a slightly different focus, but I once wrote an essay praising frivolity called “Pleasure Manifesto” http://www.asstr.org/~99ernotions/99ermanifesto.html.
    It’s work safe, but resides on an erotic fiction site that is often blocked by corporate firewalls.

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  5. Jimmy Beck Avatar

    Some of this is tilting at windmills, no? By any measure, Philip Roth is and has been a fantastically successful writer. Is that despite or because of his frivolity? Portnoy’s Complaint was a critical and commercial success. In the literary world, a new Roth book is always an event–even 35 years after Portnoy. Does it matter that “some readers” don’t like “Operation Shylock”?
    Moreover, Roth and Carter are hardly alone in their excesses (and I would even argue that most of Roth’s writing is quite clear). Personally, I find much of Faulkner and Henry James unreadable, the former because he’s so willfully overwrought and baroque, the latter because he was never able to have the stick surgically removed from his ass. I have been excoriated and sneered at for dissing two of The Great Ones, but, in Carter’s words, so fucking what? I don’t accuse them of being bad people or moral failures, I just find it aesthetically maddening to read their books. Maupassant wrote about nothing but hookers; back in the day, many people had a problem with it (even Frank O’Connor in the 1960s). But I find Maupassant’s prose to be perfectly lovely and his storytelling skills first rate. C’est la vie.
    People regularly spit on Raymond Carver’s grave (when they’re not trying to claim his work as their own) for exactly the opposite reasons: too minimalist, too spare, too repetitive, boring language, no plot yada yada. The whole Gordon Lish cabal–Amy Hempel, Barry Hannah, Mary Robison–has been roundly (and unfairly, IMO) told by the literary establishment that they are passe. Again, who cares? Were Carver to rise from the dead, he could just as easily say, “I write stripped down, understated prose. So fucking what?”

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  6. Dan Green Avatar

    I don’t spit on Carver at all, nor on Hempel or Robison. I think they’re all very good writers. Also, I don’t think it contributes much to an understanding of James, even of what’s wrong with James, to say “he was never able to have the stick surgically removed from his ass.” This is, of course, itself a moral condemnation, not an aesthetic judgment.

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  7. Jimmy Beck Avatar

    No, it was absolutely intended as an aesthetic judgment. The high-fallutin diction, the sentences that go on for days, the inscrutable language, and the condescending and hectoring tone–these are what bug me about James and what, in my view, sum to the literary equivalent of a stick-in-the-ass. You may not approve of the metaphor, but it was exactly what I meant. I do not condemn him as a man or a moral being, only his words on the page.

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  8. Dan Green Avatar

    But your words are all still words that imply moral failure. They’re not terms that have anything to do with the aesthetic consideration of fiction at all.

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  9. Kevin Holtsberry Avatar

    We must be getting somewhere people are arguing!
    Seriously though, sometimes “purple prose” can get in the way but sometimes it can be an enjoyable part of the process. One can like both pen and ink sketches and oil painting right? I think what Dan was getting at was the attempts of particular style to claim the moral high ground as to what is superior art – the criteria shouldn’t be conformity with the reigning style. I posted a quote last night from Orwell on Conrad that points to this subject as well. It will probably always be around, after all writers are human with all the foibles and jealousies that entails.

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  10. Trent Walters Avatar

    I finally finished posting on this–http://s1ngularity.blogspot.com/2004_05_16_s1ngularity_archive.html#108526684164625008–whew! The relevant part to this discussion is “More Bang for Your Buck” but I hope to work on specifics (i.e. “case by case”) later. I’m not sure how much we agree or disagree, yet. Perhaps only a dissection will tell.

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  11. Dan Green Avatar

    Trent,
    Since the post at your blog is about more than the subject of this post, I’ll comment here. Actually, I have only one comment. You’re reading the wrong “late” Roth. Stay away from the trilogy for these purposes. Read Sabbath’s Theater or Operation Shylock instead–or perhaps go as far back as The Counterlife.

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  12. Sarah Avatar

    Although my Roth education is somewhat lacking, I did read SHYLOCK and SABBATH, and found both rather horrifying in their excesses. Ultimately, at least to me, it seemed to smack more of Roth showing off how he could peddle tawdriness and pointlessness within the confines of literary fiction, and less of whatever aim he actually had with either of the books. SHYLOCK, especially, seemed to be caught up far too much in its clever construct instead of actually saying something–there was an interesting idea, but by the end of the book I was more confused than when I’d begun it.
    And as for SABBATH, was that annotated phone sex scene really necessary?

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  13. Dan Green Avatar

    It’s precisely the insistence that writers “say something”–preferably something acceptable– and stop fooling around, as well as the subsequent moral indignation when they don’t (“horrifying in their excesses”) that writers like Carter and Roth resist. The protagonist of Sabbath’s Theater is someone who himself refuses to listen to other people telling him to be good. Sabbath wants his moral freedom, Roth wants his artistic freedom.

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  14. Trent Walters Avatar

    Not having read the works in question, I venture heedlessly forward anyway! (It does sound as though I should read the works in question to decide for myself.)
    I love messing around–but messing around to a purpose. If he’s just a plain clothes dick jazzercising for thirty minutes before investigating the homicide, I’m not interested. But if he’s jazzercising and one of jazzercisers is a suspect or somehow intrinsic to the tale (love interest and/or weight problem that feeds in thematically), kick butt! The funkier the better.
    You’ll need to read the above as a double-metaphor for more than story but also style. If Roth does this, I’m in like Flynn.

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  15. Dan Green Avatar

    Neither Carter nor Roth jazzercise for its own sake (or not much), although Roth does sometimes mess around to the purpose of telling a joke–but the jokes are always integrated into his fiction’s overall design. Roth’s style is actually very rarely “purple,” but in its vigor can get fairly red.

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  16. Sarah Avatar

    I’d also like to add that I’m a huge Angela Carter fan, and don’t find her books to be all that excessive, because I’m too much in love with her use of language and her imagination. I can see why others might view her work as such, but how can one read THE BLOODY CHAMBER and not be at least somewhat moved?

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